The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

[museboxy]

The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

Wikipedia : Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one.

[The Rules]

1. Post as the mun, and write down all your characters you would like to have any constructive criticism about. RP thread samples are optional.

2. Other people write down their crit about your RP-ing and your characters, etc, logged in or anon. Just praising people is fine, too.

3. No flaming or bashing allowed. No wanking, please!

4. Please keep in mind when you write your crit that your opinions may not always be right. Some things simply are a matter of individual taste, for example.

5. Please also remember that people are not obligated to accept all and every crit sent their way as valid. Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.

Comments

[therealrobin]

@ cape_kore:
Sharon Charter/Agent 13 || agentx13
Veronica Mars || shesamarshmallow
Britta Perry || brittanator

Wanderer:
Damian Wayne || therealrobin

[nevermindtherunning]

Veronica is really the only one I can properly crit, since I'm somewhat familiar with her canon (I just realized I've never finished season 3...oops) Anyway, I've always associated you with her as you were mostly playing Veronica when we met. I think she's spot on. I adore how with really good rpers I can hear the actual characters when reading the dialogue and I always did with your Veronica.

You have her quirky comments and investigative nature spot on. I'll always think of her and the Doctor as BFFs from HWD <3

[shesamarshmallow]

Darling! MWAH!

[oversight]

Veronica is so spot-on, just so you know. Our thread may be like molasses because I am super slow, but I just wanted you to know how great you are!

[shesamarshmallow]

Awwwwwwwwwww, bb! Seriously, take all the time you want/need. I love that thread! PARTNERS IN CRIME! Whoo!

[galactically]

@ zodion & exsilium
Sheryl Nome | Macross Frontier | galactically

[heartboobs]

@zodion
Maya Amano { Persona 2 { heartboobs

Open to crit from anyone and everyone! I mostly play her in Zodion, but she's also around dear_mun and memes sometimes! :)

[fierily]

@ havenrpg
Asuka Langley Soryu | Neon Genesis Evangelion | fierily

[fulgoris]

@zodion

Elizabeth|Persona 4 Arena|lethalattendant
Trish|Devil May Cry|fulgoris

[nevermindtherunning]

@ cape_kore

the 10th Doctor @ nevermindtherunning, I also play him in memes

Also I have Mikael Blomkvist from the Millennium Series I'm still voice testing a bit mikaelblomkvist

[xxii_thefool]

capeandcowl
Minako Arisato | Persona 3 Portable | xxii_thefool

[sleepiesthero]

amatomnes
Link | The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword | sleepiesthero

demeleier
Link | The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess | eyesofbeast
Micah | Rune Factory 3 | sunshinewooly

afterliving
Young Link | The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time | diedahero

Especially looking for crit on bitty OoT Link since I've taken him from so early in canon.

[beautifulsavages]

This girl here:

Beautifulsavages: O from Savages and Kings of Cool.

Hallejuah_Jaffar: Murphy MacManus from Boondock Saints.

Thank you for your time beforehand, I really appreciate the time and critique.

[rose_of_revolution]

Illya Von Einzbern | Eighteen_winters | Fate/
Madoka Kanami | mask_of_suffering | Madoka Magica AU
Utena Tenjou | Rose_Of_Revolution | Revolutionary Girl Utena.

[thelongcon]

Allen Walker (AU) /DGM | thelongcon
Matrim Cauthon /Wheel of Time | foxoffortune

[oversight]

@ entranceway
John Blake (oversight)

@ adstringendum
Sokka (angle_on_it)


Do some memes and PSLs on top of these games. They usually run slower than my already slow pace, but I tend to backtag forever on most fronts. I feel like Sokka could be funnier and more involved, and Blake could be more interesting and less involved, haha.

[highground]

My constructive thoughts on the matter.

[justlove]

I think you're amazing and you have your characters down so well, I just could go on all day. But that's not exactly constructive criticism, is it? XD

Seriously, though, Sokka's great as he is, and every post and thread with him is wonderful. The same goes for Blake. You write him so well, and you do an excellent job balancing thoughts with dialogue and giving hooks for people to latch onto in their responses. He's very interesting and I love that he's so involved. It feels very IC for him.

So, lest I go on talking about your greatness for the next ten years, keep up the great work!

[sweetlotus]

Your voice is down pat, and you are the sweetest person to deal with OOC. I think you are a pretty amazing player. That is 110 percent truth!

That is for John BTW.

[venatical]

@ cape_kore
Bruce Banner/the Hulk | greenisnteasy
Dean Winchester | venatical

[(Anonymous)]

YOU'RE REALLY COOL AND A GREAT WRITER AND ALSO A NICE PERSON AND ALSO DID I MENTION A GREAT WRITER?

[darkspectre]

@ataraxion
David Wong | John Dies at the End | soyed

@exitvoid
Alex Mercer | Prototype | virulently

@ryansgulch
Alan Wake | Alan Wake | bestseller

I also have a full muselist where most of these guys play on meme comms.

[imafreaknow]

@ rubycity_rp
Sam Winchester | Supernatural | imafreaknow

@ cape_kore
Annie Edison | Community | anniethedayplanner

@ bakerstreet
Too many to list, but there is a full muselist here.

[stephrogers]

HOW DARE YOU.

Your characters are rich and imaginative and easy to interact with. Somehow, the threads become rich storylines and I thoroughly enjoy each and every tag.

:)

[cryptgirl]

@ luceti
Jay | Tales of Legendia | unseenspy


@ luceti, dragonhaven
Saleh | Fire Emblem: The Sacred Stones | mountain_sage


@ Homeless
Karel | Fire Emblem: The Blazing Sword | sworddemon
Karla | Fire Emblem: The Blazing Sword | swordprincess

(Note: Karel and Karla are brand-spanking new muses, journals created only yesterday. I've only posted with Karel on dear_mun, and haven't even done anything with Karla yet.)