The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

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The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

Wikipedia : Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one.

[The Rules]

1. Post as the mun, and write down all your characters you would like to have any constructive criticism about. RP thread samples are optional.

2. Other people write down their crit about your RP-ing and your characters, etc, logged in or anon. Just praising people is fine, too.

3. No flaming or bashing allowed. No wanking, please!

4. Please keep in mind when you write your crit that your opinions may not always be right. Some things simply are a matter of individual taste, for example.

5. Please also remember that people are not obligated to accept all and every crit sent their way as valid. Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.

Comments

[oversight]

@ entranceway
John Blake (oversight)

@ adstringendum
Sokka (angle_on_it)


Do some memes and PSLs on top of these games. They usually run slower than my already slow pace, but I tend to backtag forever on most fronts. I feel like Sokka could be funnier and more involved, and Blake could be more interesting and less involved, haha.

[highground]

My constructive thoughts on the matter.

[oversight]

Ffff. Right back atcha, pal. Plus, that icon? So great. Nice face, well played.

P. S. Why are we on opposite schedules? I feel like a failure of a friend and I miss you and move closer okay? Okay!

[highground]

You've got that One Thing, my friend. (But really, your playing is awesome and I would be happy to go into highly objective detail anytime.)

Aww, no way!! Time zones make everything more complicated than it should be. Sounds like a plan, though; I'll be on the next plane over.

[oversight]

That icons is great, too. And the feeling is more than mutual — glad to be super extra objective about my feelings for you perception of you characterization. Or something.

[justlove]

I think you're amazing and you have your characters down so well, I just could go on all day. But that's not exactly constructive criticism, is it? XD

Seriously, though, Sokka's great as he is, and every post and thread with him is wonderful. The same goes for Blake. You write him so well, and you do an excellent job balancing thoughts with dialogue and giving hooks for people to latch onto in their responses. He's very interesting and I love that he's so involved. It feels very IC for him.

So, lest I go on talking about your greatness for the next ten years, keep up the great work!

[oversight]

Gosh, thank you so much, bb! I really appreciate the kind words and I will strive to never disappoint you. I'm glad to hear you think my balance is just right — it's something I worry about a lot.

You're the best! Thanks for being so great (and indulgent)! /o/

[sweetlotus]

Your voice is down pat, and you are the sweetest person to deal with OOC. I think you are a pretty amazing player. That is 110 percent truth!

That is for John BTW.

[oversight]

Oh man, thank you so much for that — I truly appreciate it! By the bye, I'm a little slow with memes, but we should totally try to give it another go, if you don't mind slow replies. \o\