The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

[museboxy]

The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

Wikipedia : Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one.

[The Rules]

1. Post as the mun, and write down all your characters you would like to have any constructive criticism about. RP thread samples are optional.

2. Other people write down their crit about your RP-ing and your characters, etc, logged in or anon. Just praising people is fine, too.

3. No flaming or bashing allowed. No wanking, please!

4. Please keep in mind when you write your crit that your opinions may not always be right. Some things simply are a matter of individual taste, for example.

5. Please also remember that people are not obligated to accept all and every crit sent their way as valid. Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

hello. i've been stalking your Cas recently and he's really really good. the only thing tht doesn't strike me quite right about him is that he doesn't seem to ever use contractions like he does in cannon. for instance in canon he's been known to say 'i wasn't gonna mention it!', so he does use them often and easily. in conclusion, i think using them more would make his voice sound way more natural in the readers mind. everything else is really good though. i look forward to stalking him more.

[freetobe]

This is very helpful to me, since I honestly didn't notice I wasn't using them with Cas before you pointed it out. I will definitely improve on this. Thank you a lot, anon <3

edit: also, I'm just keysmashing over the praise, and I'm so happy to hear that you enjoy my Cas! Thank you so much, really.