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The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism
The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism
Wikipedia : Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one.
[The Rules]
1. Post as the mun, and write down all your characters you would like to have any constructive criticism about. RP thread samples are optional.
2. Other people write down their crit about your RP-ing and your characters, etc, logged in or anon. Just praising people is fine, too.
3. No flaming or bashing allowed. No wanking, please!
4. Please keep in mind when you write your crit that your opinions may not always be right. Some things simply are a matter of individual taste, for example.
5. Please also remember that people are not obligated to accept all and every crit sent their way as valid. Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.
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My biggest concern with Turbo where is always in his interpretation. Do you feel his personality/attitude/viewpoints/manner of speech/etc makes sense at this canonpoint from what the film implies? How do you feel about his, uh, unusual euphemisms? I love exploring his character and I'm always looking for feedback on how I could better it!
I'm always ridiculously nervous with KC; attempting to emulate an Annie-winning performance is intimidating, to say the least. His subtleties are especially tricky to nail. How's his balance between goofy/cheery and frightening/manipulative? Is he lisping too much? Any kind of critique for him is greatly appreciated!
Vanellope is a fairly new muse for me, and while she is very slightly AU (she's actually just supposed to be from the sequel to Sugar Rush, which is more like a new and improved version of the first game), her personality is essentially the same and I want to capture it as best I can! So again, any constructive crit or advice on her is loved!
While Aggie is an important character in her canon, she only appears during the third act, and due to the situation we perhaps only see a little of her true personality. So once again, feedback on my interpretation would be excellent!
Too psycho? Not psycho enough? Too Mabel obsessed? Not Mabel obsessed enough? How's his accent? Note that I kind of ignore the episode "Little Dipper" as far as his characterization for reasons I will be happy to explain if you want a really long rant, but nonetheless, I'd love some crit on Giddy!
I'm going to try to get back into playing Randy because the new episodes have got me REALLY excited, but if you've seen him around or threaded with him before and are familiar with his canon, I would be HUGELY thankful for any feedback or critique on him! He's a very quirky character and a bit of an unusual type of muse for me, so I'm never quite sure if I'm getting him right.