museboxy ([personal profile] museboxy) wrote in [community profile] memeboxy2013-03-24 04:16 pm

The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

The HMD Meme With Actual Constructive Criticism

Wikipedia : Constructive criticism is the process of offering valid and well-reasoned opinions about the work of others, usually involving both positive and negative comments, in a friendly manner rather than an oppositional one.

[The Rules]

1. Post as the mun, and write down all your characters you would like to have any constructive criticism about. RP thread samples are optional.

2. Other people write down their crit about your RP-ing and your characters, etc, logged in or anon. Just praising people is fine, too.

3. No flaming or bashing allowed. No wanking, please!

4. Please keep in mind when you write your crit that your opinions may not always be right. Some things simply are a matter of individual taste, for example.

5. Please also remember that people are not obligated to accept all and every crit sent their way as valid. Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.
tohko_amano: (Nervous laugh)

[personal profile] tohko_amano 2013-03-25 08:03 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, thank you! It's always a little difficult playing children, so I'll be sure to take your advice into account. The volumes of manga I've read have her speak in third person a bit..but I've probably been overdoing it. I'll get better at that in the future!

Erm..actually..I'm terrible at HTML, so I have no idea how to make it italicized or smaller. I'll have to look that up soon if it makes reading my posts a bit easier.

However, I'm glad you enjoy playing with my Yotsuba despite my hiccups!~ ^^ I'll do my best! I have no idea who you are, anon, but thank you!~

(Anonymous) 2013-03-25 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
brief HTML lesson! it's pretty easy really. for italics, surround your text with < i > text here < /i > ...except take out those spaces. like this! for smaller text, do something similar: < small > text here < /small > and you get something like this! I hope that helps :)
sunflowerfairy: (Excited)

[personal profile] sunflowerfairy 2013-03-25 08:26 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you very much! That really does help me out a lot! Again, I have no idea who you are, anon, but thank you so much!